Well done on some very successful editing efforts. The whole sequence flows smoothly and from continuity of shots to the effective relationship between the visual aspects and the sound, you have achieved a build of suspense and tension for your thriller genre.
I enjoyed that you explored the mind and a mental disorder and the twist in the plot. Your portrayal of the transition from one character to the other personality was done well.
The establishing shot in the beginning could have been held a bit longer to give the audience some more time to process where the scene is taking place.
Hi Luci
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Well done on some very successful editing efforts. The whole sequence flows smoothly and from continuity of shots to the effective relationship between the visual aspects and the sound, you have achieved a build of suspense and tension for your thriller genre.
I enjoyed that you explored the mind and a mental disorder and the twist in the plot. Your portrayal of the transition from one character to the other personality was done well.
The establishing shot in the beginning could have been held a bit longer to give the audience some more time to process where the scene is taking place.
Overall a great effort, Luci. Well done!