Blog Tool (4/5) / Content (9/10) - a well structured presentation outlining the conventions used and contrasted with the conventions generally used in thrillers. - a little more detail and visuals will add to your effort next time (mentioning things like setting as a convention / lighting as a convention / camera movements or shots like close-ups as a covention)
Question 2 (12/15)
Blog tool (3/5) / Content (9/10) - a well thought out and detailed answer - please try and split up text bodies so the slides are easier to read. Bullet points or shorter paragraphs work well for slide shows. - great analysis and reflection on the way your film engaged with the audience
Question 3 - 9/15
Blog Tool (2/5) / Content (7/10) - please check what the finished product of your blog tool looks like in preview. The grey colour background and black font were not a great match and it was tricky to read. Try steer away from blog tools that are basically text boxes the same as a normal blog post would be. - There was a distinction between Q3 and Q4 and I feel like you answered Q4 here, going into all the hardware/ software and technoligies you learnt. This question, laid out in the brief was asking about the 3 stages of production. What did you learn in pre-production? Did you write a script or draw storyboards? How did you find group work? What went well in your planning stages? Did you do a location scout? What did you learn in that? This is a good question to answer all about what you want to change for next time and how you may improve. Leave all the technological stuff for Q4.
Question 4 - 10/15 Blog Tool Presentation (3/5) / Content (7/10) - a good list of technologies, hatrdware and software but again, could have included more detail and pictures of the camera, screenshots of you working on Premier Pro, just more visually interesting. - This Question is also a good place to actually include and list the tutorials you did like the Premier Pro editing introduction tutorial and the After Effects tutorial and actually not just listing everything but critically analysing the learning process.
Overall Score for CCR - 44/60
ReplyDeleteQuestion 1 - 13/15
Blog Tool (4/5) / Content (9/10)
- a well structured presentation outlining the conventions used and contrasted with the conventions generally used in thrillers.
- a little more detail and visuals will add to your effort next time (mentioning things like setting as a convention / lighting as a convention / camera movements or shots like close-ups as a covention)
Question 2 (12/15)
Blog tool (3/5) / Content (9/10)
- a well thought out and detailed answer
- please try and split up text bodies so the slides are easier to read. Bullet points or shorter paragraphs work well for slide shows.
- great analysis and reflection on the way your film engaged with the audience
Question 3 - 9/15
Blog Tool (2/5) / Content (7/10)
- please check what the finished product of your blog tool looks like in preview. The grey colour background and black font were not a great match and it was tricky to read. Try steer away from blog tools that are basically text boxes the same as a normal blog post would be.
- There was a distinction between Q3 and Q4 and I feel like you answered Q4 here, going into all the hardware/ software and technoligies you learnt. This question, laid out in the brief was asking about the 3 stages of production. What did you learn in pre-production? Did you write a script or draw storyboards? How did you find group work? What went well in your planning stages? Did you do a location scout? What did you learn in that? This is a good question to answer all about what you want to change for next time and how you may improve. Leave all the technological stuff for Q4.
Question 4 - 10/15
Blog Tool Presentation (3/5) / Content (7/10)
- a good list of technologies, hatrdware and software but again, could have included more detail and pictures of the camera, screenshots of you working on Premier Pro, just more visually interesting.
- This Question is also a good place to actually include and list the tutorials you did like the Premier Pro editing introduction tutorial and the After Effects tutorial and actually not just listing everything but critically analysing the learning process.