You presented facts, to the point, following the brief and providing lots of examples. I suggest thinking about Slideshows in a different way to writing an essay. Try working on making bullet points that fly onto the screen in each click of the button rather than one slide full of writing in one bulk paragraph. It's just harder to read and get through. Overall you submitted some quality work, great job!
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Well done on an insightful research assignment.
You presented facts, to the point, following the brief and providing lots of examples.
I suggest thinking about Slideshows in a different way to writing an essay. Try working on making bullet points that fly onto the screen in each click of the button rather than one slide full of writing in one bulk paragraph. It's just harder to read and get through.
Overall you submitted some quality work, great job!